Horrible Shoo

This is a poem that I made up one day while doing math;

Horrible Shoo

Pete, Su,
Ed and Lu
Went out on a canoe
Suddenly attacked by a bug* named Shoo
Sadly died by Shoo
Was Su,
Suddenly drowned by Shoo
Was Lu
And Pete, Su,
Ed and Lu
Never again went out on a canoe
Because of HORRIBLE Shoo!!



**** I imagine Shoo as a fly! Makes it more Funny!!!

I await comments on my very first poem!!!